This needs finishing. Not enough areas covered and what is there is not in enough detail either yet.Currently Level 2 (D grade) - needs more, quantity wise and detail too. You should be on a B.
Have a look at Tom's for an A grade section. It's a big part of your blog so it needs more. http://media-carlton-h540.blogspot.co.uk/2012/06/copy-of-music-videos-analysis.html
This needs finishing. Not enough areas covered and what is there is not in enough detail either yet.
ReplyDeleteCurrently Level 2 (D grade) - needs more, quantity wise and detail too. You should be on a B.
Have a look at Tom's for an A grade section. It's a big part of your blog so it needs more.
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