Very nice Soph, good examples and excellent detail in places.
You do, however, need to talk more about the conventions you developed and challenged across your 3 products. You do the 'conventions met' part very well, but not as well for 'challenged' or 'developed'. You didn't show a gig, for example. That's a convention challenged. There's plenty more. Do a bit on those areas and this will get a v good grade.
Very nice Soph, good examples and excellent detail in places.
ReplyDeleteYou do, however, need to talk more about the conventions you developed and challenged across your 3 products. You do the 'conventions met' part very well, but not as well for 'challenged' or 'developed'. You didn't show a gig, for example. That's a convention challenged. There's plenty more. Do a bit on those areas and this will get a v good grade.